Friday, March 8, 2013

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  2. biz şimdi essayleri buradan mı atıcaz napıcaz?

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    1. Yes, and you will also comment on your friends' essays, let's talk about it tomorrow :)

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  3. İlk örnek benden gelsin madem :)

    THE PRESSURES OF BEİNG A STUDENT
    A lot of elderly people want to be a child.Reason of this,there is no stress and care in the childhood.Children don't know anything about real-difficult life.In the future,some difficulties probably will happen in them life but now they don't have to think it.Anyway,they can't understand anything.However,after several years,the children will be one each student.Responbilities will come,entertainment and relaxing will end.Many problems that come from outside will increase.High expectation,money problems and deciding the department are three big pressures of being a student.
    Especially our mother and father to go in a high expectation.Because of this,we afraid of being downer.They orientation to us about many point.Tthey also give us stereotypes examples about another children's success.Although they think that it's true,we influence negative on this issue.In addition,they always want to being high position from us,although they know our of intelligence.That's why,we are getting stressful more,too.However,expectation is not only one problem of being a student.
    We can't do anythink without money.If we go to another place for study,money become quite big trouble.Transportation,accommodation are places mostly for spend money.We must sometimes borrow money to our need from our friends.When we can't pay-back it to friend,trouble is getting hard.Because of the money problem,we can't take nutritious and useful needs.We must run to fast food so our performance in lessons is decreasing.In addition,we can't spend money for entertainment or a variety of hobbies.However,money is not only one problem,too.There is another big problem like expectation and money.
    When we study for UNI,we always imagine to our department but we can't be sure.Unlike our parent's election,we want to select another department in general.This state attract negative to us.After ending the exam and starting our department,we still think about the election.However,we must study the first section that we decided to.Furthermore,when we select department,we should just decide for ourselves.We mustn't heard of listening to other people's decision.In the future,we shouldn't regret our decision.
    Really,there are a lot of difficulties of being a student.Some researchers show the pressures cause negative problems in educational life.In summary,particularly economical problems,deciding and expectation influence extremely bad on this life,too.Everybody should pay attention about their child.They must assist them everytime.If I were my parents,I never do pressure to my child,what about you?

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  4. THE MOST IMPORTANT THINGS:HEALTH
    There are a lot of people live in the world.Everybody has lots of goals for life.For example;expentatio,make career etc.Eveybody has want to these things.If you have these things initially,you must be healthy because without health,not be anything.Also the most important things be health.There are several ways for be health,there are;do sport,regularly diet and regularly sleeping.
    The first way do sport for be healthy.Initially,you prepare a period for sport.When you obey rules of period,you see lots of advantages.Thanks to do sport certainly, you are nimble and strong.Also you don't ilness easily.For instance;when you look sportmen,they have this characteristic so,do sport is very important but not only this ways for be healthy.
    Another way regularly diet.Regularly diet is significant for health.Firstly,you must go to dietician and obey to diet.Also you must eat meal just in time.If you obey these rules really,you are healthy.However,ıf you want to grow weak,you are slim.In short,ıf you make regularly diet both you are slim and be healthy.
    At last but not the least regularly sleeping,too.Firstly,you must determine of your get up and go to bed.When you have regularly sleeping,you are healthy because its affect of health.In short,you must to consider important regularly sleeping.
    To sump up,health is very significant and valuble for your life.If you think your future,these ways enough.However,a lot of researchers support these ways for health.I think, you try to these ways for health.Still didn't you try?

    ZEYNEP KOLCU

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    1. A GOOD FOOD; RİCE

      Have you ever live a long time without food? Well, do you think how many days can you live? Foods are very important for people every time. We can live in the streets, we might be naked but we can’t live without eating. So, food cultures are improved all of countries in the world. Therefore there are a lot of different food types. For example, seafoods are very popular in a lot of countries which are surrounded by the seas. On the other hand red meat is more popular in upcountry. Because of food’s important, people should cook simple meals. For example, learning how to make macaroni, egg, rice, several slops is enough. I want to mention about making rice. There are three points of making a good rice; and these are patience, balance ability and timing.
      Firstly, you should be patient. For example while you are prefering to materials you should be diligently. On the other hand, rice aren’t clean everytime, so you should weed out one by one and wash it. When I was a child, I used to make fun to my mum while she weed out the rice but now I make the same thing. After completing the preperation, you should begin to fry rice. And after this point, you should jump to second step…
      Second and most important point is balance ability in every food. Because, food’s real taste is here. Two cup water are necessary to each cup rice and it swell with added water. Then, 2 teaspoons of salt should be. It is important too, because food’s another taste is in salt. After this step, another important point start-up…
      Last step, timing is as important as balance ability. Because nobody likes burnt food. So, at this point, we should very careful. Rice should wait for 10 minutes at high temperature. Next again, drained price should wait for several minutes low temperature. Waiting. It is key word for foods.
      After doing all these things, you can say that “I am a disciple but good cook.” Because your meal is ready to eat. Here is, these are the crux of many food and if you take care my suggestions you will be succesful.

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